Service Description
Add 3-7 (High Ticket) Clients To Your Pipeline Each Month.
For business owners looking to scale their client acquisition fastIf you’re tired of wasting time and marketing resources sending cold emails only to receive poor response rates, then you’ll want to start using first lines.
Without first lines, your prospects are far less likely to respond to your emails.
The first line of an email is the most important as it’s the first line of text readers see.
Research shows that personalized first lines significantly increase the response rate for your cold emails.
The first line I will write contains:
Perfect Grammar written in English
Conversational and informal tone.
it will be Personalized. this means that I will NEVER send it to another person.
it will be Genuine & well-researched.
What I need to write the first line in a google sheets document
Contact Name
LinkedIn ID or any social
company’s URL
I’m predictably successful at writing First Lines & email campaigns in general just take a look at my reviews below.
Interested?
Send me a message NOW to get started!
Yes, I write B2B cold emails in my professional career. Send me a message for a quotation.
I'm not exaggerating when I say that I've written 1000s of first lines for many different niches and I'm regularly praised for helping clients receive higher open rates & response rates
Yes, I've done this for many clients. Send me a message explaining your product/service and we can get started!
This is NOT a gig where you get poorly written first lines. Instead, you're hiring a writer who would literally spend 1+ hour on a single lead to find the best possible point to write on in an attempt to maximize your chances of converting the recipient. Send me a message now.
Yes. Message me for samples of my previous first lines. Please note that samples may give an inaccurate representation as they all follow specific client instructions.
No, I only write first lines with the data you provide me with. Any additional research (finding recipient email addresses, names, company names) needs to be approved by me first and will incur added costs.
My pricing includes 1 sentence per first line. I'm happy to write additional sentences for an additional cost ($1.00 per additional sentence)
Please provide me (in a google sheets document) with the contact's full name, the contact's company name & their LinkedIn ID, or Any active social media page.
Yes! I can provide you with a hyper-targeted list of leads to which you can send these first lines!
